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[Complete] If the Devil Wears Prada, the DoS We.. (Jun x OC)
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metufanippon
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PostPosted: Sun Jul 13, 2008 1:23 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

i wanna read 21 b too, and i'm 19 u know smile....love this fic
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 14, 2008 6:48 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Sorry for the late reply. XD But yeah, I read chapter 21 B. It was awesome! :P It didn't have too much detail and it didnt have too little! Sometimes people write things with lots of detail.... and I can't take it.
So yeah... good job! Ja ne~
-Hinamori Sohma18
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 14, 2008 7:50 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

i want to read it too... ~sigh~
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 14, 2008 10:31 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I have read 21B and I liked it alot! Wohoo!

Even if Jun isn't my no. 1, I like how you write about as a sensetive person (I'm sure he is in real life unsure)

Well, anyway I'm glad Katrina is alive! clapping
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PostPosted: Tue Jul 15, 2008 2:14 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

i wanna read it to~ whistle
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PostPosted: Wed Jul 16, 2008 7:02 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

tanx 4 d chap whistle

drooling smart2 Wohoo! clapping
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PostPosted: Wed Jul 16, 2008 3:18 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

thanks for everyone who supported this fic. i couldn't list all of your names here but i thank you for the bottom of my heart...

here's the epilogue for all of you... and i hope you enjoyed 21b... (but please don't ask me for the b chapter of "a wish from the heart". there is NO b chapter in that fic.

EPILOGUE:

To my only daughter, Katrina Ivonne.

You will inherit the Ivonne Fashion Company in Japan after you have graduated in your fashion school. However, the remaining two branch companies that are currently handled by the Sashino family will only be handled to you once you get married to a rightful man who will love you and who will be able to help you in running the whole chain of our companies…


A man went inside a classic yellow lit shop selling different sorts of jewelry.

“Ohayou gozaimasu,” the assistant greeted. “What can I do for you?”

“I’m looking for a necklace,” he said.

“This way, please,” the girl said, leading him to a glass case filled with different designs of necklaces.

The man looked at the collection, finding it hard to find a necklace to buy. “Irrashaimase,” a voice said. “Are you having difficulty choosing?”

The man looked up and saw his friend leaning on the glass, smiling at him. “Matsujun!”

“Yo!” he greeted, going around the case to greet him. “Hisashiburi,” Jun said. “What brings you here?”

“I’m here to look for a necklace,” Nino answered.

“Ah, sou desu ne,” Jun said. “For whom?”

“Ah, Matsujun, stop fooling around.”

“Hai. Wakatta.” He went around the large glass case, looking for the perfect necklace.

“How’s the trip?” Nino asked.

“Ah, it’s tiring,” Jun replied. “I can’t believe the shops really sell well in the West.”

“And I think you now know how to speak English properly,” Nino teased.

Jun smirked. “I know how to speak English, baka!” He kept on looking. “Oh. Here!” He called an assistant and had her remove the display necklace from the glass. “Nino, what about this one?”

He showed him a necklace with a silver chain. Its pendant was dangling, with a crystal heart. An amethyst butterfly was dangling below it.

“Kireii..” Nino said. “Did you design this one?”

“Nah, Katrina did that one. It has a pair of earrings. Do you want to get the earrings too?” he asked.

“Well, offer me a discount,” Nino said, smirking.

“Ever the cheapskate. I don’t even know if you’ll buy this,” Jun said disbelievingly.

“I’ll buy that,” Nino said, offended. “Do you doubt me?”

“Iie,” Jun said, leaning once again on the glass. “I won’t give you the earrings for free but if you buy the whole set, I’ll give you this one.” He went to another set of glass cases and took out a men’s necklace. The pendant was gold shaped like crown and adorned with red little rubies. There was also a small chain connecting to an identical crystal heart.

“Sugoii,” Nino said. “If I buy the earrings, I’ll get this one for free?”

Jun nodded. He asked the assistant to pack the jewelry. As Nino made his way to the cashier, he said, “Nah, Katrina made that especially for you.”

“So, Katrina was also the one who made Aiba-chan’s ring and Reina-chan’s bracelet?”

Jun nodded. “Hai, she made that for them.”

“And Oh-chan’s…”

“In fact, I was shocked. She was actually the person who designed that blue bracelet for Anna-san,” Jun said. “So she just made a partner ring for Ohno-kun.”

“The ring with that large blue sapphire?”

“Hai.”

“And the lily necklace?”

Jun nodded.

“Then why are you charging me for these?” Nino asked angrily.

“Because you’re so gullible,” Jun said. He was already holding the paperbag. “I’m not really asking you to pay for that. Douzo.”

***

“How’s your trip?” Katrina asked as Jun got inside their house.

He shrugged. Katrina went near him and put her arms around him. “I missed you so much,” she said.

“I missed you too,” Jun replied, kissing her. “So, is there anything…?”

Katrina smiled. “I have wonderful news for you,” she said. She touched his hair.

“You look quite excited,” he said.

Katrina pouted. “Why shouldn’t I? What we’ve been doing finally yielded a result.”

“You mean…?”

“Hai,” she said. “It’s here,” she said, holding her still small stomach.

“Yokatta…” Jun said. He touched her cheek. “Katrina, that means you should start smiling more.”

“Nande?”

“Because I don’t want that child to be a devil like you,” he teased.

Katrina slapped him playfully, though it was a big blow. “How dare you!”

Jun touched his cheek, red with the impact. “I was just joking!”

“Don’t joke with things like that, Matsumoto!”

“You’re also a Matsumoto,” Jun replied playfully.

“Urusei! Now, let’s go to the dining room and eat. I cooked dinner.”

“Dinner? That might be poison,” he teased again.

“Well, I might have poisoned you a long time ago if I wanted to kill you,” Katrina said. “Daijoubu. Okaa-san taught me how to cook.”

Both of them proceeded to the dining room hand in hand.

Both had been in the quest to be free to love…

Both have come a long way to be free…

Now, nothing could separate them…

No matter how harsh the world might be…

Their wings will guide them together…

CN 6/4/08

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I know you'll all kill me because i finished that fic last june 4, 2008.

anyway, i hope you'll still continue supporting my fics...

One Heart, One Love (ongoing)

Hanakotoba wa, Ai no Kotoba

The Myth of the Rising Sun (working title)

"My Love" series:

My Love is a Game

My Love is just a Dream

My Love is My Friendship

My Love is Dangerous

My Love is Top Secret

(though all of them are just working titles)
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PostPosted: Wed Jul 16, 2008 4:13 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

"What we’ve been doing finally yielded a result"
haha..i like it when katrina said that...

so,is this the ending??hope to read your fic again....
aa,can i guess the title for which member?? hehe...

keep up d good work,chosi~~

drooling smart2 Wohoo! clapping

p/s: i wonder how you guys can write such a beautiful story.... clapping
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PostPosted: Thu Jul 17, 2008 12:41 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

clapping clapping clapping clapping clapping
great job choshi!
hoping to read more from you..

THANK YOUUUU~~
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PostPosted: Thu Jul 17, 2008 2:26 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thank you for your hard work! Wohoo!
I love the epilogue!
I enjoyed reading every chapter of this story
and I'm looking forward to your other fics..
"My Love" series sounds great! clapping Heart
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HYD_superfan
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PostPosted: Thu Jul 17, 2008 1:25 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Waaaa~
Arigatou ne Choshi-chaan!

Subarashii ending.
Great Job!

I'll keep stalking out for your fics clapping

I really loved this fic!
Keep writing! clapping
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PostPosted: Wed Jul 23, 2008 3:04 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Why have I waited so long to reply!?
This story was topnotch! I enjoy your style of writing!
And what's this chapter b? I'm over 18, can I read?!
Anyway, can't wait for the other stories you have planned!
Ganbattekudasai!

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PostPosted: Wed Jul 23, 2008 8:33 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Waaaaaaaaaaaahhh!!! I ABSOLUTLY LOVE IT!! Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart

you should become a writer, I'd buy your books clapping clapping
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PostPosted: Sun Aug 03, 2008 9:40 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Adrika wrote:
Waaaaaaaaaaaahhh!!! I ABSOLUTLY LOVE IT!! Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart

you should become a writer, I'd buy your books clapping clapping


AGREE with her! i'll buy your books!
i LOVE all of your stories~ Heart
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PostPosted: Sat Aug 30, 2008 3:48 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I absolutely love this story! I admire your writing style, I was never able to write in such a serious tone. Thanks for writing it!
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