Hello minna san. ... this is my first fanfic I hope you like it ... gomen for the grammar... I really did my best translating this into english.

Title: The beginning of a friendship
Rating: R
Author: Kike18ni

"Hi" ... Ohno said.
"Hi" ... Matsumoto replied.

Arashi eh?- Sakurai said.
Matte shoto!!!...Arashi!!!! I swore under oath to have listened the name would be Atarashi*-Aiba responded exalted.

Ha ha ha ha they all laughed in chorus. Aiba got blushed and covered his mouth with both hands bursting out a laugh also. But Ninomiya remained quiet until Aiba asked if somebody could play some musical instrument.

It was their debut day, everybody knew little to each other, with the exception of Aiba and Matsumoto whose before had been together in another group.

-Aiba what a chance!!! ** meet you here again.
-Hai anou, so...they called me at the last moment but I feel very happy.

Meanwhile Ninomiya went to the room's corner where they were and he took out a black package that nobody had seen that it existed until that moment. He opened it and took out a beautiful black acoustic guitar. Little by little he started to play A.ra.shi in acoustic version.

Ohno was very timid but something popped inside his heart and started to sing with his nightingale's voice:

you are my soul soul itsumo sugu soba ni aru
yuzurenaiyo daremo jama dekinai karada juu ni kaze o atsumete
makiokose A.ra.shi A.ra.shi for dream~

Then Aiba out of nowhere took out her saxophone, took a lot of air and began with a tune very soft and sweet.

Matsumoto smiled and embraced to Sakurai. Both embraced made of chorus Ohno in a sway. They sang the song for quite a while. They watched ones to the other ones and they formed a circle. "It 's the time to do it" -Matsumoto said.

Nani?- Aiba asked.

Janke!!!- Sho said.

Seno...The battle was between Ohno and Sakurai ... the situation was tense...Ohno could not believe they were about to debut and Sakurai was feeling super nervous like the rest of the guys... but things happened that way ... the winner was Ohno...Aiba got close to and embraced him, and begun to cry. Ninomiya who was the more solitary of all told to Aiba: "It is supposed that Ohno should cry not you!!!"

With their eyes closed touched by the moment started to laugh aloud.

-"Guys are you ready"-They listened for the loudspeaker ... They went in order first Ohno, Matsumoto, Sakurai, Aiba

and last Nino toward the platform ... and with you Arashi!!!!...

-Hello Hawaii!!!...

And that was the start belonged to a boys' group who got friends joined by the music.

Notes:

*Atarashi means new...Aiba was thinking than it was the name of the group since they were "news" in the show business and it sounds off very similar to Arashi.
**I am not sure if I use correctly this word...chance like synonym of Coincidence

Eventhough your story was a bit difficult to read (due to the grammar errors) it was sweet. It conveyed their nervousness about starting out and showed signs of their future closeness.

Thanks you so much My english is terrible but at least you answered...I thought nobody wanted to do it due to my bad english...but please if you do not mind to help me to correct the errors send me a pm onegai.

Hey that was sweet.
Don't worry about your english too much... (lol mine isn't better xD)
As long as you try to write it in english it's fine. ^^ And you become better with time, ne?

Just one thing.. Don't know how to say it.. but sometimes the sentences have strange line breaks o.o
Like here:

Quote:

Little by little he started to play A.ra.shi in acoustic version.

This makes it kinda hard to read I think.
*hug*

Hey Thanks!!!!....I "fixed" it...I did not see it when I posted the story

I feel happy

Congratulations on your 1st fanfic!
You're very brave for posting it especially since (I assume) English is not your native language. I can understand the nervousness, I felt the same way when I posted mine.

You certainly made a great effort in translating it and I salute you for that. Don't give up and keep learning. Eventually, you'll get better.

Thank you for posting ^_^ I agree with b00kw0rm79. That was a good start. Gambatte.

Gambatte on the English! I'm sure someone wouldn't mind editing it for you like for grammar and all if you wanted to get it edited.

Nice way of creating the boy's feelings of nervousness before the debuted.

Good job and gambatte!

Waa~ Kike, this fic was great!!! Oh you sooo have to write more stories like this!!!

this was a good effort. eventhough you had grammatical errors and all.
but hey, errors don't matter when the story's good.
keep writing!

ahh... nice moment... when they started bonding as a group..