[Complete] My Girl In Heaven (Sho)

shaobb · Guest

Awwww... this was a sad, but sweet and cute story.
I really like it!!! Thanks!

choshi · Posted: Tue Nov 20, 2007 1:56 pm Post subject:

that's it???!!! cry

anyway, i would not be able to write something like that... so, congratulations... i'll be looking forward for the next one.

kunyit9 · PIKA★★NCHI DOUBLE Joined: 11 Dec 2006 Posts: 191

Aiba's down, Sho's down..
three more to go, yay!! big grin

Yoshimaru-chan, THANK YOU for this nice fic!!! wink

misstress9 · Posted: Thu Nov 22, 2007 8:30 am Post subject:

I can't wait for the next one. I can't wait to see everyone else's sweetie... keep up the good work.

yukari_mousy · Posted: Sun Feb 03, 2008 11:51 am Post subject:

I'm sooo glad i read aiba's fic first!! ^__^ Im in love with TWO of your fics now!! YAY!!

Quote:

Get a hobby, don’t you have hobbies? What’s your job? Put everything into your job!” she exclaimed. “You might get a promotion?” A promotion? To what? SMAP?

my favorite quote EVER!!
hahahah!
cute story, and cute end. Made me cry a bit.
i wish it could have been longer, but good things come in small doses, ne?
in love

love this!!

helloova · Posted: Wed Feb 13, 2008 5:04 am Post subject:

I'm glad, Sho is finally found someone that can replace his loved one. smile

I can't stand that he's being depress for such a long time.
It's sad. Really.

rachspring · Posted: Mon Mar 17, 2008 6:28 am Post subject:

I love Sho's story. His girl in heaven. smile

And we really get to see his character here, so much different from aiba. LOL!

I enjoyed it. smile

merash · Posted: Tue Apr 15, 2008 5:34 pm Post subject:

i thought this going to be a very sad stories...
but it really great!! the ending is superb too!!
you did a great job!!

violentxxxpose · Posted: Sun Apr 20, 2008 5:33 pm Post subject:

This is the first fan fiction I've read. It's wonderful! big grin

I like how open ended it was. Gives the readers a lot of ideas.

mcmugsocute · PIKA★★NCHI DOUBLE Joined: 31 Mar 2008 Posts: 181

nicely written! I like how Sho has a girl in the end to comfort him and for him to get over his sadness. Thanks for the story ^.^

candycup · Johnny's Jr Joined: 28 Jun 2008 Posts: 54

Cute story, but I don't feel the reader get to know a lot of the girl. All we know so far is she came back from Canada, play games, loves ice creams, her sister lives at same building as Sho, that is all. About half the story is about Sho's died ex-girlfriend. Devil

I have to admit you did a really nice on portray Sho's character in this story.

ummmm....
confused

I just want more......

flowers

I am sorry if I sound bad or my comm. is too harsh. Have some flower.

kawaii_ryu · PIKA☆NCHI Joined: 13 Aug 2008 Posts: 93

awww...

sho finally laughed this time... so happeee!!